i totaly agree with

i totaly agree with Bilalkaifa polka to choppy

Sorry

Sorry but this sounds more like... well like polka. Fast polka with metal guitars.
And as ScorpionPoison said U kinda chopped it up too fast so it sounds wierd. If you'd slow it down a bit and use an other rhythm then it could sound like a frickin awesome remix.

freakn' awesome!

If you played this at a concert then I would totally go!

ouch

You took the original and chopped it up, too fast I think it might sound ok if you slowed it down. The drums get very very repetetive, good song choice though.

not metal enough

it sounds like theres a frigin acurden instead of a guitar.