Okay so after my recent blunder I'm experimenting with how I should write comments, and this time, I've already listened to the song before starting the comment, and my first impressions go like this: it's really nice, It has a good flow to it, maybe work a bit on the effects and overall it has a nice structure to it. And since that isn't constructive I'm going to dive deeper into it now since I've noticed my opinions might change between each take on it (I just am coming back from a song I listened to 23 times so I might be pretty tired and might come off as pissed or something, I'm going to try to not sound as such and if you find any issues with this one then PLEASE let me know, I really am trying to find what kind of comment is the best for what person/me, since I'm not gonna endure through each song 20 times)

The actual review: The drums at the start are really cool, I like how you started the song, it deffinitely leaves a good first impression. I'd maybe town down the left rides and work on the effects, since it seems to be repetetive, maybe try delaying some notes, changing the volumes of some notes, and such. I know it's Jamuary so I'm not gonna dive into that too much, Since this is understandable. The overall idea during the first two minutes is perfectly fine, I have no big issues with it. At 1:48 you've got a pretty nice transition, I have some smaller issues, but I believe it's mostly just my tiredness at this point, because structually I think there's nothing wrong, It gets kind of interesting at 2:30, although I find it find it funny you tagged this as an E song, maybe you should change it to T considering the wording? I'm really sorry if I came in whatever way like a shithead, I've just been trying to find the couple past days how to review stuff in comments, and now I don't know where's the border between to little and too much, so I'm gonna sum up it as, I like this one I'd llisten to it again and good job. If you'd like me to leave you alone that's understandable. I think I'm more leading into others giving me hints than me giving hints to others, which also shouldn't be happening. Sorry I'm putting you through this.