OK this actually really quite good but just one thing, I think that the intro but, up until around 0:09 is unneeded and kind of jarring when compared to the rest of the song it would be nest if in later carnations you just didnt have that bit in
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hope all is well with everyone thanks for letting me know how this made you feel, how i could maybe improve, what you like/dislike etc.
boza44 responds:
thanks so much for your feedback... yes i think i messed up this intro- i will try and repost with it fixed. thank you so much!
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