THIS IS SO COOL!!!!!!! You've gotten so much better at making super catchy stuff, amazing song! The ending doesn't hurt it at all for me, but that's just a me thing, some people prefer actual endings but I really like it :)

the lack of an ending hurts what is otherwise a very good track. sometimes I find, if it's hard to find a proper ending for a song, you can kinda battle royale the instruments, picking them off one at a time -- until silence remains. maybe try that -- i could see it working here.

I really love the way the notes swell throughout here. the emergence of the lead pad at about a minute or so was so lovely, and then the everpresent sense of evolution the track takes on once it does arrive is really inspired. this piece is moving, and i'm grateful to have heard it! thank you.