I'm sorry but I'm gonna be completely honest. There's lots of things wrong with this. The chord progression feels weird, and the melodies are unmemorable to me. I just have no idea what I am listening to. Please work on your sound designing your synths because they just sound like saw waves with no effects. The drop's plucks/fills are alright but the chord stacks sound heavily compressed, and there is also no mid bass or sub to support the stacks. I just hear saw waves drowned in reverb and compressor. Try taking inspiration from other melodic dubstep songs because that's how I got an idea of exactly what I wanted to aim for. Might help you if you do the same. Focus on arrangement, composition, and making simple but memorable melodies. And make sure to develop your sound design and make sure you're not just placing sounds just for the sake of placing sounds. My bad if I'm a bit harsh!! Pls don't take it personally lol

And keep in mind - you should be proud of your work (everyone should), but don't feel too attached to what you make. Always seek improvement.