got quite good...
but the main beat changed a bit too much. If you wanna have multiple melodies try to make them sound good together.
As some other ppl said it does seem a little rushed.
If i had any suggestions it would be to take the tune which began at around 00:20
and continue from that, because that was my favourite part of the song and sounded damn awesome.
8/10
4/5
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