Sounds like you're good at making music, but the problem is you should stick to one genre and one song.
This sounds like it's parts of many songs glued together.
Try to find your way to make a song with variation but sticks to one genre...
ahh the description ...
what does your description say?
nice beach-late-summer-night-dance song.
what the hell was that guitar solo trying to prove? the song can do without
could you not make a full production out of the ideas in the first 40 sec or so ... that would be great.
oh and uhh this is far from dnB. and I hate people who can go on and on about small details (me ;-P)
my descriptoin says umm.. Please review lol!!!!!
oh the solo does suck