Do not take this as hate, but here's some feedback! Mostly mixing and technical stuff

First of all, the volume is unbalanced, you can see that on the waveform. You can fix that by making the quieter parts louder

And second, trust me, never ever use stock drums. There's nothing wrong with them, but because so many people know them, they are gonna be like "Ohhl I know that sound, I know how the song was made!" and you don't want that. Ideally, you don't want people to recognise even a single element used in your song. Instead of using stock stuff, you can download some drum sample packs. Most of them are paid, but you can come across some free ones, like this one I found: https://soundpacks.com/free-sound-packs/acoustic-drum-samples-wavbakery/

Anyways the rest is fine. Hope I helped