Personally, I would have put some modulation into it. It's a kind of trial you can afford with your actual compositional skills. So why to spend only 2 hours instead of investing more time to create something better?

this is awesome :) like the chill beat. also, asking in advance, may i use this if i ever want to make an animation?

This reminded me of Stryder
Nice one

00:00; Gruff and/or generic epic voice begins narration as the camera pans through space.
00:24; Camera begins panning toward a planet as the narrator fades out.
00:40; Pan to action happening on surface of said planet
Over all, very greer.