nice but missing something

this is a decent track but feels like its lacking something to tie the pieces together. when it pauses it feels like its done and going into another song. A little choppy but definitley has potential!

p.s. i was 5 in 1991 and in my hayday of cartoon watching! lol

i was 1 year old

nice song! but cartoons are gay. . . its funny like anime and shit haha its all you ever see on T.V these days nice somber song, chilled and sad. keep it going