this could be good if you tuned your guitar, my ears are bleading.
This melody has potential... I suggest you polish this piece up by tuning your guitar a little bit better, less crazy weird-ass guitar riffs or whatever, and keeping the melody on time. Also, sometimes the electric guitar overpowers the acoustics behind it so I suggest you turn that down a bit too.
Like I said, it has potential, it just needs more work. I'd like to hear this again if you ever remake this and polish it, I'd like a PM to hear it.
Well a few things here.
1:DUDE TUNE YOUR GUITAR!!!!
2: some of the guitar effects were overdone. this could have been so much better if you had just turned the effects down a bit.
3: yes wow you have a whammy bar but that dosnt mean you have to use it every three seconds.
Sorry if i came across a bit harsh but im just offering constructive critisism here. apart from my eccsessivly negetive review this is a good tune.
If you resubmit it with less whammy bar (and a little more sustain/delay i think) pm me and ill re-review it for you.
I'm checking with the local shop, I believe it;'s a Guitar Intonation issue, not that I haven't technically tuned it.