contemplating contemplating.. LOL.
HEY GIRL its hannah!
this is really good. i think it would sound cooler if you got some actual people (erik) to perform it. :D:D
so yeah, that's my constructive criticism!
you really need to fix the drum sounds, especially your crashes.
the techno-like sounds need to be toned done a wee bit too, this is a rock song after all.
over all, good job
thanks! i had a hard time deciding which genre i should make this song, so i left it at rock.