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Hovering over rain

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It is melancholic, but like REALLY melancholic.

03/04/2023 20:43 GMT +1 EDIT : Fixed dissonant notes

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I like the relaxed mood at the beginning. The static is a bit loud in the mix, even for lo-fi, but the beat is catchy and the rest of the sound design has a bright, airy feel. I like the jazzy chords too. The texture is very minimal, though, and despite the addition of the string pads later on, I felt like the piece could’ve used a lot more variety and fill. Maybe some vocals, or brass solos, or basically anything that balanced out the mix with some more upper-mid-range tones. The mood, atmosphere, and production here are all solid, but I really would’ve liked to see you put more effort into the composition. Still, the piece has potential with the sound design and progression, and I’d encourage you to keep working on it. Keep at it, Lumiflag! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
6.5/10

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Uploaded
Apr 3, 2023
1:11 PM EDT
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4.2 MB
3 min 4 sec

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