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Spirited Winds - NGADM'22 FINAL ROUND

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ADM'22 Final Round


Hey there, thanks for passing by :)


This is what I came up with for the final round, it's been a long competition and I want to thank to everyone involved! Life went by and time was short, stuff could always be better but let's not intoxicate this comment with my own negative criticism, it's time to let those thoughts fly away. I think this is a nice song based on the time I spent on it, even if it's not the best I could've made.


Anyway, hope you like it and tell me what you think :D


About the track


It all started with some folky melodies and that intro texture which I found cool enough to start going. The structure was a little bit more squared at first and maybe repeating the main melodies a bit more would've been logical and help establish the ideas but my brain works weirdly and a new section comes in and I'll let you figure out the rest!


Starts in Eb in eolian, sometimes dorian. Then modulates to Db and finally to B.

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Most times, "Your song made me fall asleep" is a distasteful insult.

But here, where do I begin?

This song feels like you are in the stratosphere, floating, no worries. I have no words to describe the way this made me feel.

Thank you for creating this song.

Santi-Montali responds:

Thank you for listening and the kind words

This is so beautiful, I love it.

Santi-Montali responds:

Thanks!

The melodies and orchestration are phenomenal!! I sense a lot of inspiration from Joe Hisaishi.

The transitions at 0:54 and 1:59 are quite masterful. I love how the song ends on a magical, wonderous chord.

I hope you soon get the opportunity to compose for an animated film and have your score performed by an orchestra :D

Santi-Montali responds:

Thank you! The first one is already an upcoming reality and the second... well that one would be a dream situation haha but one never knows!

eliasalija, Spirited Winds - NGADM'22 FINAL ROUND

1]Technicality 2]Production 3]Composition 4]Emotion 5]BonusPoints
10,9,8,10,9 x 2 = [92/100]

Lovely song eliasalija, very well done. Inspired and heartfelt tones! The six of you final round contestants will probably all see a perfect score out of "emotion." I'm going to take one point off from production for what I felt like were noticeably absent bass tones. I'm an EDM slut, we tend to focus on those bass tones too much. I told everratic I'd fight an EDM bias, given the genre that you two have mastered: things sound great. Have you ever considered padding orchestral bass tones with some suby synth compression or another bass patch? IMO, Newgrounds artists are their best when they are toying with new sounds and progressive genre splicing. Coming into the final round I would have loved to hear some synth play from the classical peeps... it's where I'm taking that bonus point from. I'm aware of your strengths and weaknesses, sticking to your strengths is a fair strategy but I love hearing risky ideas. I think Zechnition consistently demonstrates risk with his style.

Thank you for that insightful commentary, I think everyone is feeling a little tired and worn at this point, but you are finally free!

I've told a few contestants that I consider "three minutes" the bare minimum for a deathmatch track. You were right there, some orchestral tune ups, a few seconds of silence, or the conductor tapping on a music stand would have net you another point! Sequenced came out swinging with 8 minutes of track (that I judged a little hard for being too much) but it's kind of a curtesy concept that I wanted to see tracks between three to five minutes out of respect to the other contestants. If everyone wrote 8 minute bangers I'd actually hate it, sometimes a song can be too long in my opinion especially when a bracket has 64 contestants but for the final round I'd have wanted a slightly longer opus.

I can't take off points for technicality or emotion, you wrote beautifully. I hope I've described the minor grievances well enough, it can be hard to justify scores but I hope this doesn't deflate you at all. I loved the song and you've all performed wonderfully. Cheers eliasalija!

Santi-Montali responds:

Heyyy thanks for the review! I get what you mean, I couldn't experiment much outside of the orchestral landscape because -life- haha. Anyway, thanks for your work!

I like the dreamy strumming at the beginning and the flute melodies. Elements of the sound design and harmonic framework sound vaguely far east-inspired, and the atmosphere and flow of the piece work quite well. There's some dissonance in the texture from around 1:10 - 1:25, but it serves to smooth over the transition into a new key very well, and the more energetic last minute of the piece gives it a triumphant and conclusive flair. The final chord seems to be of ambiguous character, like the winds are soon about to shift again. Overall, fantastic work, Elias! Best of luck in the final round. ^_^

Santi-Montali responds:

Thank you very much TL!

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Score
4.83 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 21, 2022
7:01 PM EST
Genre
Classical
File Info
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6.7 MB
2 min 57 sec
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