I followed the suggestions and added a few things, tell me what you think.
oh my!
haha, this is great dude. such a happy little melody, i just can't help but laugh while listening to it, i just imagine some sort of troll hopping along a path to work or something. there is some crazy sounds in this. but mid song, the arpeggiating solo thing came in a little too loud, it happened once ore twice actually. but only took points off clarity. Overall this is a very happy-go-lucky song very dear to my heart. i love it. yay!
Hehehehe. A troll bouncing along to work... quite an interesting vision, lol. The arpeggiating solo... I see what you mean so next time ill try to keep everything closer to the same volume. I'm glad you love it :). yay!
Nice FL Work.
I can't seem to make much on my FL studios. Mine is screwed up so i can't use sytrus effects. But anyways. Good song! Catchy.
-OrigamiNugget
Thanks for the review. I dont see why sytrus alone would make a difference but who knows. Catchy, eh? Cool.
Its kind of wierd, I never really write my songs, they sort of write themselves, so I never know what other people will think.
Thanks for reviewing :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
johnfn 
