Oi Yoi Basses.
Mastering is iffy. Bass design is good, but the basses are a little repetitive. A little to much silence during the buildup and drop hits to hard when the silence is over.
The melodic parts are beautiful though

4/5

Whole song just feels kind of empty… maybe would have sounded better at a faster tempo, like 110-120. I do like the melody at 2:02. The second drop feels just as empty as the first, however, the double time drums are a cool effect.
Overall, I think you have a lot of potential.
8/10