I am going to be honest with you in many of your songs I heard some parts ahead or before others and they do not fit with the drums or chords which makes it sound bad but that for me is not the worst thing what bothers me is how strong he is sound of some instruments or drums, some have excellent volume and some are quite loud which means you have to turn down the volume, and other instruments sound quite low.
If you read everything, thank you, with this I am not telling you that your music is bad, if I am not telling you what you can improve on, because the truth is that the melodies are very good, as are the chords.
We learn from mistakes
EDIT: That melody is so good im gonna think something