very dystopian, chill vibe going on, the e-piano and general rhythm of the song is lovely.

like TaintedLogic wrote, it could've complimented from a louder, clearer mixing, drums especially .

Otherwise great job, keep it up!

I like the pensive mood at the beginning and the dissonance in the E-piano line at :18. The texture is full and well-balanced, but not mastered particularly loudly. The drums in particular might’ve benefitted from some more compression. I like the sense of climax into 1:13, and how that leads directly into the moody bridge. In the second half, I think I would’ve liked to see you do a little bit more with the composition, though. This piece has a lot of underlying tension that never really gets resolved, and the abrupt ending only compounds that fact. You nailed the mood, sound design, and progression here. My complaints are mostly with the mixing and compositional details. Still, strong effort overall, JA4Y! Really paints a picture of mice sneaking around a kitchen late at night to steal some cheese. :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.5/10

I love the mood this track gives, the name really fits