A strange tune you have here, its pretty odd sounding and the "VOCALS" could use some training or more practice before you lay it down, but its a start i suppose, now as for the tune itself, its ok nice drum beats, i think the only real issue was the vocals so you may want to fine tune on that, its an ok beat just needs more effort specificly on the vocals, but other then that this was notbad, ok actually.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as suggested above this backround tune was great nice drums, its the vocals were it can be improved on,
cool rock sound
This is a great general rock tune.This is pretty good.I enjoyed it.Creepy intro but gets better!
Lol thanks. I thought the creepy intro would serve to peak the listener's interest long enough to keep them listening through the good parts. :P I'm glad you liked it.