This one was odd
So while it was odd it still had a unique sound, there are some "VOCALS" in there but you really cant hear them much, the music itself over draws the vocals, so maybe lower the music and raid the vocals up abit, but even at that the vocals were in need of more in-tune with everything else, so those are a few things that could be worked on, and with some more practice it could be better.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned more vocal practice to be in tune with everything would be nice, aswell as lowering the music and raising the vocal sounds.
The beginning was creepy but it got really good really quick!