The vision is there and I really felt what you were trying to do, but the execution was sloppy. The lack of timekeeping really messed this one up. 80's music was a lot more mechanical and simple. So maybe if it wasn't so cluttered it would be much easier on the ears. Try doing less next time if you wanna give it another shot. I suggest listening to Kenny Loggins or Genesis if you haven't already done so. Good luck.
Thanks. This is...my earliest work. It was THE first song I ever made in a multitrack with an awful soundcard and an original 80's synth. My timing was off, it's totally done without any loops, I don't think I used a metronome either lol :) This song is respectfully 3 years old now, It's always needed lyrics. The most unfortunate thing is that I can't bring up a master copy to master the individual tracks any better because I had a huge data crash and lost all the master copies of my 200+ songs. Lesson...Backup your stuff regularly I learnt the very hard way. This is a response to all 3 reviews. Thanks for your time!
Although I don't know how music in the 80s sounds like, I still like it. The song almost has a theme of its own.
I like it.
im so srry, but.....
the 80's were not like that, no electric guitar, just some kinda funky outer space electric triangle that you stole from a alien weapons factory that was making a weapon to destroy us all. by making us death.
no really some of its got some tune, but there can be improvment in a couple spots there.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.