Needs work.
The vision is there and I really felt what you were trying to do, but the execution was sloppy. The lack of timekeeping really messed this one up. 80's music was a lot more mechanical and simple. So maybe if it wasn't so cluttered it would be much easier on the ears. Try doing less next time if you wanna give it another shot. I suggest listening to Kenny Loggins or Genesis if you haven't already done so. Good luck.