notes as im listening:
- the notes at the beginning are long. both the lead and that background thing. it sounds too smooth for the very rough sounds used.
- impressive loudness, stereo image, and general mixing
- that said, that "bass" (?) playing the long notes like at the beginning sounds weird in general, and the sidechaining/compression is part of that.
- the vocal is a little too repetitive. its too long and recognizable as the word "go" to be used like a percussion instrument.
- the horizontal composition is good. none of the transitions stood out to me in a bad way. it flowed nicely.
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Winkwing responds:
That's the wing tech style baby! So close to being right but always fucking a few things up!
I kid, thanks for the feedback, planning on showing off what some of my FLP files tend to look like after a remix is made if you're interested.
Either way, constructive criticism is always welcome!
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