it remade it entirely, it is what I wanted it to be in the first place
and bro, you bombarded me with the reviews I've never had someone review my songs this much xD

it resembles some bits, like ending with a bang, and a slow tempo at the beginning and end.
and also the piano in the beginning

i tried something different from the original one
supposed to not sound like the original, but its comparing what i did then to now

thx

:))