I'm hungry now
***This piece was selected by an author of the Monthly Writing Contest Jan / Feb 2011***
Right, it's got some good buildup and it really does sound good when the intro finishes with a very strong beat. I love the way that it all seems to come together, with the yelling over the top of the track complimenting, as opposed to drowning it out, which can be a common issue.
Major judos to Cyril for his vocals and for the way you've made a redux with them on. Perhaps it was a little short, since I felt the vocals were just getting started and the song is over. Since you've got such a great intro, it wouldn't really work that well with looping either, so that;s a closed route for you.
Keep up the good work Rig and remember, only YOU can prevent school fires!
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