Only thing i can think to help improve this song
somewhere in the song you should raise your voice. then with an acustic intro and go into destortion after the solo think thats where your voice should let it all out. its a damn good song as is however. especialy when it picks up.
keep it up
Awesome Dude nice lyrics
I think its realy kool how u did this. but i was kind of wondering were and how u did this
This was the first song I ever did, and I really did it as a software experiment more than anything. It was done on a MacBook with the recording program "GarageBand", which utilizes multi-track recording. I used the little built-in mic on the MacBook. I've since gotten far more expensive and professional equipment, including an Mbox 2 Mini with Pro Tools LE, a condenser mic with pop-filter, new guitar, new computer, and lots of other goodies.
You don't hear many songs like this on Newgrounsd. It's a nice refreshing shower of....Ahhhh :) (with smiley face emoticon!)
I really felt some emotion there in that guitar solo. You have an excellent voice to. I really enjoyed listening to this song. It's cool you even did everything in the song. A one man band :P
Anyways, gotta fifen you and give you a 10. Nice work man!
Thanks, this is definitely an emotional song. I wrote this for a friends of mine named Johnny. Johnny had a friend named Cali who I met only once, who a few weeks later killed himself. Cali had liked this song when I played it (at the time it was only the first verse) so I finished it for Johnny, who was grieving over Cali's death.
this song is my second favorite by you (next to Waves of Tomorrow)
i love the solo
and everything else just goes along so wonderful. its rare to hear a song like this.
Hey thanks Keith! I plan to re-record all my songs in the near future, keep an eye out.
i liked it a lot... Although some of the mechanics might be a bit shaky, its a great song.. And it was also a good inspiration for the new song i myself am writing.
Good Job... Hope to hear more.
Oh yeah, I definitely agree about the shaky mechanics and whatnot.....the built-in MacBook mic just can't compare with a good condenser mic on a sturdy stand.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.