This is nice, has a very chill ambience to it. The vocals could come up a bit, and the doubling could be a little tighter. That said this is one hundred percent good, and one hundred percent going in the right direction.
Lyrics:
Climate City’s covered
In human shaped chalk lines
Make way for the newcomers
By ripping out their spines
There’s a spook machine a-sputterin’
Inside of every mind
You can hear their engines running
As the gears shift n’ grind
From the pillowy gutters
To the city’s neon light
Trudged through the alley hallways
To the place where you’re buried alive
From a backseat lover
To a murdered passion for right
Lost to the eyes of a harlot
Where misfortune n’ kindness align
This is nice, has a very chill ambience to it. The vocals could come up a bit, and the doubling could be a little tighter. That said this is one hundred percent good, and one hundred percent going in the right direction.
Ah yeah, I could always spend a little longer on these songs, I always find myself doing that well after I put em up though haha. Thanks a lot, your feedback is one hundred percent appreciated.
Great song, Connor!
It's a short song, but it packs a lot of emotion.
I love the guitar work, very mellow but always different and nice.
Thanks a lot, yeah they can't all be super long I guess. I just try to say what I wanna say in whatever amount of time it takes to say it I spose
This is gorgeous. Moody with a beautiful instrumental. Also some of my favorite lyrics from any of your tracks.
Great work, man.
It is pretty moody haha. Thanks! That means a lot for a very short song haha
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