I like the mysterious bell synth in the beginning. Then there's a sound of a breath I think and a modulated synth transitioning into a beat. I'm digging this part. The melody and backing synths sound good and give a kind of a dissonant feel. I like the simple beat but I feel it could use a bit more variation. I feel the strongest part of this piece is the bell synth melody. My favorite part is at ~44 seconds to about 2:34 and I think it has what the later parts of the track are lacking, I feel like that last section could have benefitted greatly from the addition of a pad or some backing instrument(s). Overall, mix seems pretty tight, maybe some reverb on the lead would be good. I like the track, but I feel the ending could be improved. It does have a touch of a cinematic feel to it, I feel like it could be in a video game for maybe a cut-scene or dialogue scene in an rpg. I do like the minimalism and the mood of the track. Composition is good, mixing good, I like the overall aesthetic. I would just change the ending and vary the beat a little more. But as it stands, not bad.