spintunes, funny song competition!

the prompt for round 1 was "Y axis", write a song about something to do with verticality, metaphorically or literally... as you can tell, my track is all about volume, and- mostly about people turning it UP too HIGH...nothing much to talk about, i just want the people who play loud music in schools n on the street to TURN IT DOOOOOOOOOOOOWN!!!!!!!!!!

song bio n lyrics here:

Volume | Mandrake | Spintunes (bandcamp.com)

if you cant be bothered going to bandcamp, heres the lyrics... here!

[yall call this a verse right?]

the song of your dreams, played so loudly in the streets

the people around, are so much louder than they should be

i wonder how you're so damn loud yet unaware about who's around

gotta wonder why you set the volume so. god. DAMN.

[chorus]

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGH!!!

keep it doooooooooooooooow!!

(funny bleepy interlude)

[i honestly dont really care what you call it, im calling it steve.]

the song of your dreams, plays even in my deep sleep

theres so much around, i cant keep up with anything

i wonder how you're able to sound so optimistic yet so down

gotta wonder why you made your voice so. GOD. D A M N.

[chorus]

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUD!!!!

keep it dooooooooooooooown!!

why's the volume HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGH?

keep it dooooooooooooooooown!!!!!!!!!!!

CAN YA TURN IT DOWN ALREADY!? JESUS CHRIST-