I really enjoyed this! I think it would benefit from some clearer, deeper bass. Would give it a bit more power. Other than that though, a pleasing bit of air wiggling!

good, although i agree with the criticisms highlighted in the other reviews tbh
i also think the transition immediately after the drop is a bit sudden, although that's probably just me
and again it ends kinda abruptly

overall though, good work
carry on doing what you're doing :)
- jack

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Suena genial, me gusta los efectos que agregaste. En muchos aspectos hay que mejorar como es la cuestión de la mezcla, la percusión se pierde con el lead principal además de que llega a saturar en algunos momentos.
Me gusta la composición musical tienes la idea principal (◕ᴗ◕✿)
Espero ser de ayuda mi amigo y que tengas excelente día
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I love the subtle transitions and buildup in the beginning. The beat seems a little subdued. I also feel like the fat synth leads might benefit from a little more reverb. I like the clear lead that comes in around 2:15. I feel like there isn't much panning going on with the instruments, and I think adding that would help the mix a lot[EDIT: upon second listen I do hear some panning, forgive my untrained ears but I can hardly hear the kickdrum and I'm using studio headphones]. Overall decent composition with some nice melody thrown in. I feel a little more work on the mix and this song would be aces.