Sounds like a long theme from an olskool videogame. The static in the beginning is a little loud, but the rest sounds pretty good. I might use a different cymbal synth or sample on your hihat. You could try some drum machines that are out there laying around the web
The song is also quite long with mostly the same instrumentation. You could try to vary them in velocity or loudness, since it is quite slow and slow developing. The instruments themselves sound good, though