do not expect anything good from an experimental track, but this doesn't sound logical to me

It's a little faint, but good.

I do not expect anything good from an experimental track, but this doesn't sound logical to me
first of all, I like the dark and weird atmosphere of it
the drums are odd, you should have moved the whole drum to a place, in this case, the kick is played in the left ear while the snare isn't. It's very odd.
I'd suggest having the bass played in an octave higher, this sounds like someone's vomiting lol