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I can tell you're just starting out, so definitely things to work on, but there are still things I enjoy about it. The pads and such in the intro are ominous and cool. The intro does sound empty though, like more needs to be happening to fill out the mix more. Some kind of soft bassy element like a soft droning reece in the intro could help. The elements you have could be louder, and some reverbed out background elements would create a better atmosphere. I REALLY like that arp that fades in during the build.

The drop has an effective, basic flow, and some of the sound design is cool, it's just an execution thing for me. The drums could use more saturation and compression because right now they don't really have much punch under the drop synths. The drop synths themselves are a little thin. I would like to hear you try something lower pitched with them. Some distortion, compression, reverb could help them be thicker, and more riveting

So yeah, some decent aspects to this, but I do think improvement could be made on the execution/mixing front

PinkShirtDude responds:

thank you a lot for this review, I'll surely will do better next time, all the best!

En la cuestión de la intro es algo rara, por las palmadas algo desinconizadas ademas de los leads que chocan sus melodias. la voz esta genial y robotica, Necesitas ponerle algo se sinechain en el bajo y las melodias para que sobresalga el kick. me gusta la idea que tiene.
Pero hay que arreglar partes de la canción en donde es algo dispareja la melodia de la pecusion como en el minuto 1:49 al 2:00.
Cuando inicia el segundo drop el lead esta tomando toda la canción y no se distingue mucho el bajo del dupstep.
Sigue intentando amigo <3 puedes lograr cosas mas grandes solo falta paciencia y las bases para que sobresalga una percusión y se ajuste un bajo.
Un abrazo y hasta mañana ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

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Listens
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Faves:
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Downloads
4
Votes
8
Score
4.25 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 14, 2021
11:13 PM EDT
Genre
Dubstep
File Info
Song
4.4 MB
3 min 13 sec

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