ahhh lost the original draft of this, will just break it down into points on the spot

+ooo sewerslvt inspired. first time seeing someone being inspired by them on here, cool stuff
-ringing can be felt in the amen breaks. detecting the frequencies that are ringing and cutting them would fix ths
+i like the glitchy effects and percussions, nice touch
+also the tempo changes
*although you could also pair this up with a key change, having the sounds play in a lower key and pitch them up once you're reading to transition. this'll bound to hit harder
*you should utilize more transitions if you want to lead into a section or change sounds, the changes at 2;32 and 3;02 feels a bit disconnected. if you don't want to use transitional sfx, drum fills and tweaking the instruments to help lead into the next section will help
~it feels weird having a transition at 2;22 and not making a change to the section like changing the synth, adding a synth, or just changing the melodies a bit...
-melodic synths feels a bit too dry. add some reverb and it's all good
-and while you're at it, some stereo widening wouldn't hurt to give more depth, especially to the amen breaks and the melodic synths which feel narrow
+speaking about your synth-scape, they're pretty nice hehe

overall, a nice listen...

epis

Sorry this took me so long to get to 😅. Ok so after 0:34 I think you put the kicks in there more recently and also tone the attack down. At 1:09 - 2:34 I don't know what the lead is. It kind of feels clustered. I would say try to work on panning in this area so that lead comes thought better and it can produce a better sound quality (maybe I'm not an expert.) Maybe playing with volume as well. I love the rising ending into the cutoff of the song.

Overall I think this song is a journey. By that I mean it has a really good feeling to it that I like but I think that feeling can be expressed more if you worked on a couple of things. Really nice! Keep up the good work!

the first problem is the theme, the first part doesn't go well with the rest, I'm sure that the track would sound better without it. That leads to the second problem is that you have a happy melody over a dark-ass intense drop. I recommend using the harmonic minor scale.
But anyway, I like how you compressed the distorted Reese bass, it sounds very loud, but it doesn't crash with other instruments, and that is what I appreciate. Various dark percussion, I'd say this has some potential to be in a Madness Combat animation lmao. I like the transition to the drop as well, before there was a tempo change, there were glitches.
And as always, I like having a calm outro after a hard-ass drop, like you've beaten the final boss and now you can go home.

Yoo that vibe :D