This definitely has better and more interesting ideas than the original for sure, especially the drops feel better. I feel like the biggest problem for all of your songs is the low end, like you are really not going in as much as you should. The drops aren't as impactful and feel more empty without the huge sub basses following the main basses. They are quite tricky to balance, even if it looks like it is the same volume as the rest of the frequencies, it will still feel quiet just because of our big brain hearing. I don't hear this problem that much in the second drop and it's probably why it's my favourite part of the song.