I really like the angelic vocals at the beginning and the narrative form of the lyrics. The guitars sounds really pensive, and the vocal harmonies help fill out the texture well. Again, the vocals are really soulful and rich. The addition of the heavier guitar and stronger snare on the second chorus is a great choice. The use of phrasing and transitions in this piece is great. The solo at 3:15 really ties the piece together, offering a real point of arrival and release for a piece whose lyrics are kind of inherently inconclusive and filled with tension. I think this is your strongest work yet, Sloan! Kudos on an awesome track. ^_^

Very nice. :)