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Nice!
I like the synthwave vibe to it! Great Job!
0:08 really enjoy the drum programming here! makes me think it can be expanded into some sort of breakcore song.
0:47 melody kind of gets weak here, doesn't really have much structure. i believe it could make it hard to follow along, sounding more like listening to randomly generated melodies. I would recommend either making it more of a consistant arpeggio or trying to give it more of a structure of notes it goes back to (like a bit of repetition)
1:10 melody improves, more consistant and easy to follow along
1:30 more drums here could be good, to make it more of a climax to that section if wanted, the absence of the hi-hats but with the melody being more intense is a bit odd (that isn't always bad tho, depending on what your going for)
1:50 good vibes :)
2:06 could use some more variation, a bit of a change to the chord progression would make it impact harder (however if going for something more laid back, having it the same is fine)
2:20 nice break to transition to the next section, could use a riser to make the next section more impactful.
overall a very good track, chill yet a bit mysterious!
There's something quite 80s-like about this. I quite like it. The stabs in the melody are just *chef's kiss*.
On top of the music isee nothing but quarts deposit
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