I love this. Can't wait to hear more. The opening was great for setting the mood for the story and the narration is awesome. The overall story is pretty scary. The best when Frank nonchalantly was talking about his wife's death. The way he described it showed he gone numb from the trauma which makes it scary than the usually hammy ways one would described the loss of a loved one.

The music at 10:00 sounds similar to this. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i3ieQxm_M2I

Now I'm not gonna try to spoil anything but I am gonna make a guess. You do not have to answer this nor do I think you should. I am mainly making a prediction and I will wait until the next episode to see if I was right or wrong. The boy Lindsey is talking about is a red herring.