hmmmm is that a complex time signature i hear? the drums sound wonky and i'm wondering if you do utilize that. i really dig the drums.
anything besides that? i.... it could be better. for starters, your bass is too weak, and that really gives a big hole in your track. this track could also use an actual melody instead of relying on arpeggiations and a really slow piano that doesn't flow at all. instrumentation is also very generic. maybe that was your intention? (edit : it actually is lmaoo) to leave this empty just so musicians could be psyched to fill it in... i'm not sure but it feels like you could do more justice to this song if you want people to flip this
that being said, i still might flip this nonetheless hehe :3
Dieswyx 
