clipping bass hits detract from a sterling piece of ambient work.
I'd maybe even remove them.
I can add some nice guitar drones and licks, just give me the chords.
everything except the bass hits is balanced, incredibly indie. i love it. it's roughly 140 based on arp. decent progression.
i could do great work on this
I am editing this review now i am on monitors.
There's literally no issue at all. So I apologise, my standard speakers have an issue with them, likely blown the bass.
listening now on monitors it's brilliant, maybe those bass pipes are still too forward but that is preference. Send me a mix without them.