Unlike the previous guy, I have no idea in hell how instruments work. So I'm just gonna say how it feels. It slaps like pretty much every single track you made (seriously, ever since I found out you exist in march, I've kept at least one of your tracks in my playlist (Faster than Light)). It's really wobbly, and funky. I like it!

I think you're on the verge of a really good track here. My only suggestion would be to change the instrument you're using for the melody. I would experiment around, but for some reason, the one you have right now is a little grating on the ears and is muddying the mix. Nothing wrong with the notes, just that particular instrument choice. Otherwise, I love the rhythm and the pulsar is a very different but cool touch.

EDIT: I think the reason that instrument is bad is because of the echo on it. I think that echo might be hurting the mix.