Not bad man. You've got the meat, you've got the sides, you've got some nice clear capture. All you gotta do is ration out the serving sizes. Jokes aside, I like your sections. With a few areas like 2:15 being a little too frantic. You're guitars are way too loud, at some points they sound choppy and overcompressed. If you just dropped the db on the guitar and maybe softened up your compression you'd have a certified killer of a track on your hands. Keep it up man!