Not a huuggee fan of industrial so can't exactly give this a review that isn't biased by my own preferences, but I'll try
The less melodic parts have super good design and elements, albeit being a liiiitttleee repetitive.
The parts with the lead are a little shrill, personally can't like that, maybe try putting it down an octave or so..?
*Exception is 2:08, seems to fit really well with the other part, as most producers do, you put the main parts all together at the end, very cool :D
I wish you had finished the ending, could have topped it off really well, but not what I'm going to base my opinion on.
For an industrial song, pretty damn cool, 3.5/5