Okay tbh dude... Your songs would sound much better if they had some kind of sub bass within them... It just sounds really empty without anything so I suggest in your next songs to add sub bass and add some more stuff in your drops to fill it up, like for instance some percussion or background noise but really overall I really enjoy the idea of the song as a whole. Just try and add more to it and add sub bass to the drop mainly. Anyways look forward to your next work :)