Interesting but pretty random. I like the 808 drum elements. Those sound good. I'm very confused on a lot of the wooshing and the piano seems not to really go with the rest of the song. I recommend maybe some study on YouTube of music theory and song structure, and I think your ideas will start to come together nicely. You can also follow bedroomproducer's blog to get some new instruments that will help you along the way -- there are plenty of free instruments available online

Everything is pretty random, like the patterns, the FX, the structure... You should focus on each elements when you're doing a full song.
Hope I wasn't that rude, wish you the best,

~ Ahurac