It starts well! Wasn't sure it'd really reel me in at first, but it did after all! Feels like there's a little narrative clutter with the stutter sometimes, but overall it flows well, feels authentic, when the sound effects start - or at least when I first really noticed them, with the pelting rain and car tires screeching... that really adds a lot to the atmosphere. Solid production! Good volume/balance too.

As for the story I suppose it'll just get better from here on out. :) Looking forward to seeing where it all leads, and what those collaborative story-writing efforts garner. If you need any additional vocal cameos later on that mine might contribute to feel free to reach out.

Awesome initiative with this; refreshing with a more story-based podcast too. think it might actually be the first one of that type that I listen to.

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Nice job! I'm interested in where the story is going.
Zeph is a little bit hard to follow/understand now and then (did he have a hangover when doing the interview? lol) but he (you) sounds very natural and "believe-able" as a character.

Looking forward to the continuation! :D

Not bad. The narrative seemed less like a story being told and more like a person venting out his day. Which really factors into this story. Like a confessional in a reality show.

This is pretty interesting. I'm not sure if this is intended, but the way you talk sounds accurate to what you're trying to represent- a struggling person looking for therapy. While sometimes its hard to follow though (stuttering?), with practice I believe that'll get better. It would be cool to see an attempt on different voices, like the guy below the floating group of people- but that's just my preference.

But in conclusion; as a guy who haven't seen touched upon this kind of stuff before, I say good job. Kept me hooked.