Not bad.

Yeah, I can feel this! Love that melody starting at 0:53, but damn does this come alive at the 1:25 mark, almost to the point that the rest of the song almost feels redundant as it can't quite compete. I think you're teasing to0 much before coming back in at 3:50, but hot damn it does feel rewarding!

I would say this could probably be trimmed down into the 3:00 - 4:00 minute mark, but that's just a function of my being impatient and my personal taste.

Great tune, great work, and I'll keep an eye out for your stuff.