The drums samples are pretty cheap, then sound like the LMMS of FL stock ones, you can find better ones on the Internet. The melody is pretty simple, I advise you to give it more rhythm. EDIT: I like it better from 0:54. It lacks of bass imo. It also lacks of sidechain on everything that is not the drums. The structure is pretty random, I mean it's there but it could be more distinguished.
Keep it up, I hope this feedback was not too rude and actually helped,
~ Ahurac