Well..

Alright. Here is the criticism. The drums and the bass were recorded well, BUT your guitars sound like as is you were screaming into a pillow. In other words they were really muffled so it sounded like just noise. The vocals were recorded with too much bass. You want hardly any bass in the vocals and a lot of highs and mids, especially if you're going to sing through a distorted mic. It was a good song, but it's a shame you can't really tell from the recording. Nice screams though.