The kick feels inconsistent in volume at times, and elements fluctuate between sounding too harsh and too dull. Do you have a limiter on your master? If so, you might want to tweak the controls or use additional plugins so that the compression isn't so harsh. But other than that, the rhythm is nice and the sounds aren't half bad.

Everything is fine, the only thing that is a little wrong preset for the melody, it is desirable to choose a better one...