I was confused when I read the title.
She's saying "I want a piece of you." ;)
the track is overall simple, not having many samples/fx, but I'd suggest adding more than this
I like the intro,
but then again, you kept the song too simple, when the drop hits, it hits weak, like, it needs more energy, and to have more energy, *layer* the synths, layer it with top lead, usually, it's the lead that plays the melody but 1 octave higher and it's a sine/square lead.
Again, lack of samples, you need a variety of FXs, not just only use one downlifter and one riser
oh and, try not to have so much repetition. might wanna vary the melody
i hope you will have a better project next time
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